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[cinderlily]

Title: Quiet
Author: cinderlily
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Summary: Slow uninterrupted sex was a luxury.
Author's Notes: Originally written for Twitter porn request by bubbles83, but then I wrote more for it. Still short and porny. Thanks goes to Jenna (aka mausi) for the quick and sweet beta-ing. Any mistakes are still mine.

Slow, uninterrupted sex was a luxury that was rarely available on Atlantis. Most of the time, when they dragged their abused bodies in to one another's bed it came down to a quick and dirty session of getting off, racing to make sure neither fell asleep during it. (Rodney was fairly sure that John was going to have to forgive him for that sometime.)  So when it came down to it, and they had the chance to really enjoy it, they did.

Rodney put his scientific mind to task, letting himself focus on the important things. The weirdly addicting scent and taste of sweat that always seemed to come off of John. The flashes of skin as he methodically disposed of the uniform. The feel of warm skin below his fingers. The sound of John muttering what Rodney could only assume to be commands under his breath.

"Ten hut, Colonel," he breathed against John's stomach. He thought momentarily about lifting his head to force a salute but couldn't bring himself to break contact.

"Shut up, Rodn... Fuck, to the left."

As he licked slow circles around John's belly button, for once Rodney was okay with being the quiet one.

Comments

[adafrog.livejournal.com]

Lovely story. But there were several run on words?

[cinderlily.livejournal.com]

Oh crud! That is what I get for taking from email to LJ semagic. Thanks for the catch and the reply. :D

[beelikej.livejournal.com]

Gosh. I already liked it when it was just the three lines, but this is made of guh. And I don't even know who these guys are. *g* Yum.

[cinderlily.livejournal.com]

Stargate Atlantis... Let me just say that they are the slashiest slash that ever slashed. I mean, seriously. They go on dates. In CANON. Weirdness. :)

And thanks! :)

[faelinn.livejournal.com]

That was just lovely. I particularly adore the atmosphere you created. It's really amazing how well you did that, especially considering how short this is. Really nice fic! :)

[cinderlily.livejournal.com]

Aw, thank you. I was kind of afraid it would seem rushed, I am really glad the atmosphere came through.

(Your icon breaks my heart a little, but in the good way. Oh Rose, how I love thee. :D)

[bubbles83.livejournal.com]

OH! That was fantastic.

[cinderlily.livejournal.com]

Hehe, thanks :D (And thanks for the prompt too, as I haven't written in forever!)

[lerah99.livejournal.com]

This is just beautiful! Thank you for posting. Mmmmmmmmm, McShep is the perfect way to start a Saturday evening.

Thank you again.

[cinderlily.livejournal.com]

McShep is the perfect way to start EVERY evening. ;)

Thank you for the reply. :D

[bluespirit-star.livejournal.com]

Mmmm, lovely.
Thank you!

[cinderlily.livejournal.com]

Your icon, wow. Mmm. Nice mental image. :D

And thank you!

[bluespirit-star.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I just love a bit of McShep snuggling. *g*
The full manip is here (http://community.livejournal.com/starshinedreams/18782.html) if you fancy a look. (No pressure!)

[morebliss.livejournal.com]

"Ten hut, Colonel," ... "Shut up, Rodn... Fuck, to the left."

That is perfection! Funny, hot and *them*. Thank you!

[cinderlily.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I hoped that line got the voices right, I am always a little nervous about John.

I am glad you liked it. :D

[misskatieleigh.livejournal.com]

♥.

[cinderlily.livejournal.com]

Awww. John and Rodney, I miss SGA.

♥ back to you too! :D

[misskatieleigh.livejournal.com]

I sort of forgot how awesomely dysfunctional they are. Makes me want to go reread all my favorites or something. XD